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used to think that I was the only writer
in the world who started stories without knowing
where they were going. I thought that all other
writers knew exactly where their stories would
lead, and that they had their plots all planned
out before they even began. I don't think that
any more. Since getting to know a few other
writers I've learned that we all seem to do it
the same way - take one or two ideas and just
start writing. This isn't always easy to do. It's a
bit like packing for a holiday but you're not
sure where the plane is flying you. It's exciting,
sure, but you get a bit nervous too, wondering
where you're going to land and what you're going
to do once you get there.
Eleanor Nilsson
writes in her book Writing for Children
about an idea she had, taken from an image in a
book she read. It was the idea of a woman
cleaning the phone box out the front of her house.
When I read this I started to think about this
woman too, and began to wonder why she was doing
that. Then I thought, what if she's cleaning it
with a toothbrush? Why would she use a toothbrush?
Perhaps she's run out of regular brushes. Maybe
she used to work as a janitor for the council and
can't stop cleaning stuff, even if she has to use
a toothbrush. Perhaps her husband has done
something especially bad, and she's using his
toothbrush while he's at work but not telling him.
My first two books
started with one idea. Almost Wednesday
started with one line: "It was the last time
I saw her." I still don't know where that
line came from, but that's what I wrote. Then I
started thinking. Who is it saying that line? Who
is "she"? Where are they now, and where
is she going? Why isn't she ever coming back? How
will the narrator feel about that, especially if
he forced her to leave? How will her family feel
about him, if he caused her to go? So I started
writing, not knowing where it was all leading,
and a couple of hours later I had 3,000 words
about Charlie and Beck on the beach in a
Tasmanian fishing town, arguing as an enormous
storm gathered above them. That is where that
book began, all from one line, or one idea.
My second novel, Full
Moon Racing started with a picture in my
head, taken from my memory of travelling
overnight in a car and waking up in a strange
place. In my mind was a teenage girl, Gunner,
riding in her cousin's HQ Holden, on the highway
between Sydney and Brisbane. I knew she was
leaving home, I knew her cousin was leaving too,
but for different reasons, and I knew that it was
the middle of the night. That was all I had. So
again I started asking questions - why are they
leaving, why did they have to go at night, where
are they going, who will they meet, how will they
change while they're away? I started writing, and
some time later I had a story.
There is a risk in
writing this way. Sometimes you'll get on a roll
and write 10,000 words of wonderful prose, only
to realise that it hasn't taken your overall
story anywhere good. Don't worry about it - just
put it aside and start again from a place you're
happy with. You might use that passage again
somewhere else, or you might not. Either way it
hasn't been wasted. Writing is a lot like music,
and practise is just as important to writers as
it is to musicians. Don't ever feel that a long
passage has been a waste, and don't be frightened
to throw it away if doing so will improve the
story. Part of editing is being able to be savage
with your own work.
I was once asked
to write a story by an English teacher. It was
one of those "Write about anything you like"
exercises, and I went to this teacher and asked
him what my subject should be. He gave me the
usual "Write about your trip to the beach"
answer. That was when I started to think that
perhaps I could look at this old lazy idea in a
different way. What if I'd never been to the
beach? What if I'd grown up on a sheep farm
somewhere and had never seen the ocean? Wouldn't
that be a bit different from a trip to the beach
made by someone who'd been there a hundred times?
What would I think of that enormous body of water
that people who live on the coast don't seem to
think too much about? The result was Seaside,
which you can find via my Musings page. The thing
is, any idea can be looked at from a different
angle or a different point of view to become a
new story. Try it some time.
Finally, let me
make you a promise. If you think that before you
can start writing you have to sit down and
completely plot your story from beginning to end,
then you'll never finish that story. Or to be
more accurate, you'll probably never even start
it. Grab an idea, even one that seems a bit dumb,
and start writing. Don't be scared of writing
rubbish - we've all written rubbish at some time
or another, and you can always put it down to
practise! But one day you might surprise yourself!
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