| (Before
I start, let me warn you that a bit of the ending
of my book Captain Mack is about to be
given away. Not all of it, but a fairly important
bit, so if you plan to read it, and I hope you do,
remember that I did warn you!) One of the more common
criticisms that is made of my third book Captain
Mack is made not by reviewers and media
critics, but by almost every school student who
reads it. To be fair, it's not always a criticism.
Sometimes it's just an observation, but it's
always followed by a question. The observation is:
"You don't tell us what happened to Captain
Mack," and the question which follows is,
obviously enough, "So, what does
happen to Captain Mack?" I'm often then
asked if I plan to write a sequel. Kids love to
have their stories all wrapped up and complete,
and that's fine. I don't have a problem with that
at all -- a great number of adults like the same
thing.
Why is that? Is it
because Hollywood has taught us to expect a story
to reach a perfect conclusion within a couple of
hours of the story starting? This is almost
certainly the case. In a lot of cinema (and this
seems to me to be more true in American cinema
than European cinema) the observer sees the main
characters presented with a problem which they
then set out to resolve. And when the credits
roll ninety minutes or so later, the audience
expects to see that problem solved to their
satisfaction. If they don't, they feel cheated.
TV is the same, and I think we all get used to
that. The weird thing is that the American movie
industry seems to think that an important
movie which deals with important and "serious"
issues can engage in this tying up of the loose
ends nonsense but still pass itself off as
serious cinema simply by being longer. The fact
is, though, at the end of such a film, most of
the problems we were presented with at the
beginning are dealt with and solved. It's just
taken twice as long.
But real life isn't
like that. Real life is a series of dilemmas, and
every solution to a problem brings with it
another problem. Tying up the loose ends is very
convenient, but it's not very much like real life.
And I don't like
to write that way. I prefer my stories to have
some element left over to the reader. I want my
readers to think about what the final ending
might be. My reason for doing this is that such
an ending includes the reader. If everything goes
to plan this type of conclusion makes them think
about the story, and leaves them with an element
of curiousity and interest in that story. I think
that's important.
Why is it so
important? Because of the way a reader reflects
on the story when it's all over. If they look
back and see that the story was all tied up
neatly (and as such perhaps not a lot like real
life) they will then see the characters in the
story as not entirely real. The characters will
seem like movie actors after the credits roll --
just actors in a wrapped-up and finished-off
story ready to head off and make their next movie.
I prefer my
readers to ask themselves questions about what
might have happened after the last page is turned.
You see, every decision we make changes our lives
just that little bit, and I think the same thing
applies to characters in a book. If a writer
leaves his or her reader with a character in an
partially unconcluded situation, then that
character will live on in that reader's mind.
Where did he go next? What decision did he make
on that last page? Did Danny try to find Captain
Mack so he could return what was rightfully the
old man's, or did he hang onto it? Did he go and
look for Captain Mack's son and give it to him
instead? Were the bullies really expelled, and if
not, what kind of reception did Danny receive
next time he went to school? Is Captain Mack
happy at last? Does Danny ever actually get his
eye fixed? All these are questions the reader is
left with at the end of my story, and they weren't
left that way because I was lazy or because I
couldn't think of how the story might finish. No,
I left it that way because by not telling the
reader every last detail, those characters live
on as if the story is an account of something
that happened to real people.
That's
why it ends that way. I might write a Captain
Mack sequel one day, but for now, imagine
your own. It's more fun like that.
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