| I
hope you're ready for this, because it's pretty
radical. For
many years writers wrote their manuscripts by
hand, and it was an incredibly tedious process.
They had to write each draft out separately,
because they had no choice. Then the typewriter
came along, and the manuscript looked nicer when
it was finished, but each draft had to be
completely typed again.
Now we have the
personal computer, the PC. Practically every PC
has a word-processor installed on it. It is one
of the great applications of the PC. Now everyone
can print off a letter or a story or a brochure
that just over ten years ago would have required
a trip to a printshop. But no more.
These days PC word-processors
are WYSIWYG (wizzy-wig) which stands for What You
See Is What You Get. This means that if you
change your typeface on the screen, then that's
what it will look like when you print the
document out. Same goes for formatting and layout
and all that groovy stuff you can do now.
But this poses a
problem for writers. When you've finished your
first draft, you see it there on the screen,
nicely formatted and looking ever so finished,
and it becomes very hard to make changes. I don't
mean simple changes like giving a character a
different name or adding a comma or rearranging a
sentence a little. No, I mean big changes, like
completely rewriting a scene or a conversation,
or changing the way a character reacts to a
situation. Once you see your story up there
looking published, it becomes very hard
to change it. It's very difficult to be ruthless
and savage with your edit. Because you're not
really rewriting at all, are you? You're just
fiddling with cosmetics without allowing yourself
to cut deeply into your actual story.
Cutting and
pasting is another convenient but potentially
dangerous feature of the modern word-processor.
How easy is it to move an entire passage from one
part of your document to another. But this can
really affect the flow of your story, and I find
there is often a ripple effect throughout, once
you start moving bits around willy-nilly (or
wizzy-wiggy!) You do need to be very careful with
cutting and pasting.
So should we all
be going back to typewriters, then? Is that my
advice? I hope not. No, but in a sense what I'm
going to suggest is borrowed from the era of the
typewriter. Here's what I do when I've finished
my first draft. I go through it a couple of times
on my screen, just to iron out a few of the more
obvious problems, and a few of the grammatical
problems that are always there to begin with.
Then I print it off, all 200 pages or whatever
the length of the manuscript is.
When I've printed
it off, then comes the brave bit. I open my
Windows Explorer, select the name of the file I've
been working on for months, and I hit the Delete
key. My computer always checks, almost as if it
can't believe that I would really want to do that.
"Are you sure you want to delete
this file?" Yes, I am. And then it's gone.
What then? Well
then the hard work begins all over again, because
I start typing at the very first line, reading
from the pages I've printed off. Yes, it's
tedious, but I find I can be much harder on
myself this way. I'm not in love with what I see
in front of me on the screen, and if a paragraph
or an entire chapter really bites, then I can
change it or get rid of it without feeling too
guilty. I have been known to do this three times,
for a full novel. It hurts, but I think it's
worth it.
So don't throw
your computer away. But do think about how you're
going to edit your next story, and try rewriting
it for real, by actually typing it in a second
and even a third time. Believe me, it works.
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